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    | 1 |  | Column 2, end of 3rd paragraph "The fourth…and the fifth planet…are 
	separated from the sun and from each other by the two asteroid belts, which 
	significantly cuts down on the sunlight they receive."
 | Asteroid belts are 
	unlikely to significantly cut down the sunlight received by a planet located 
	further from the sun than them.  This is because the asteroids in these 
	belts are really not spaced anywhere close together, unlike how they are 
	popularly depicted in pictures and movies.  The greater distance these 
	planets are from the Rukbat, however, does significantly cut down on the 
	sunlight received. | 
  
    | 1-3 |  | Paragraph bridging pages 1 & 3 "The second [continent]…is approximately the size of 
	Earth's Eurasian landmass.  The last [continent]…is isolated on the 
	other side of the world in the middle of an ocean five thousand miles wide.  
	The planet's diameter is approximately sixty-five hundred miles."
 | These distances are
    based on the assumption that Pern is slightly smaller than Earth, but 
	according to the scale in the Atlas of Pern, the planet is quite a 
	lot smaller than earth, making these measurements incorrect.  Of course 
	it's debatable whether the fault lies with the Atlas or with the DLG. | 
  
    | 2 |  | Full page image Drawing of Pern from space
 | The globe of Pern is oriented
    with north downwards; perhaps this was intentional but it would be more 
	recognizable if it were rotated 180°. | 
  
    | 3 |  | Image on upper half of page
 Diagram of the Rukbat solar system, labeled "Orbit of the Red Star Through 
	the Oort Cloud"
 | Label doesn't quite match
    picture, as the Oort Cloud isn't actually shown (it should be well outside 
	the orbit of all the planets).  Also, what's that blobby outline around 
	Pern and the first asteroid belt supposed to depict--a Thread cloud?!  
	This image is also somewhat confusing as it is shown in only two dimensions, 
	while the orbit of the Red Star is really in a plane at a notable angle to 
	the planetary orbits.  As shown, it makes you wonder how thread makes 
	it past the first asteroid belt to reach Pern, but with a 3D depiction as 
	found in the Atlas, you can see that the belt isn't in the way. | 
  
    | 3 |  | Column 2, last paragraph "Timor, the more distand moon, is about the size of Luna, while the closer 
	moon, Belior, is somewhat smaller…"
 | If you go with the 
	measurements in the Atlas which have Pern much smaller
    than Earth, then the moons should be smaller too, in proportion. | 
  
    | 3 |  | Column 2, last paragraph "There is a constant thirty-mile-an-hour head wind, driven by the patter of 
	tides and thermals from the volcanoes."
 | How exactly would a
    "constant thirty-mile-an-hour head wind" be caused by the tides 
	and thermals? | 
  
    | 4 |  | Column 1, end of 2nd paragraph "Castor was unable to join the landing party due to a broken ankle."
 | In "Survey: P.E.R.N.c" 
	it seems to be Castor's leg that is broken, not his ankle (given that he's
    said to have compound fractures, and has a gelicast on his leg). | 
  
    | 5 | col 1; end 2nd
    full para | "Only one unexplained phenomenon was 
	discovered: a large number of circular bare patches scattered all over the 
	planet's surface.  The team assumed a local fungus or vegetable plague 
	was to blame, although they had no idea why the strong winds would not have 
	reseeded those spots." | The surveyors are said to
    ascribe the bare circles to a local fungus or vegetable plague.  This theory is
    mentioned when they notice the spots in orbit, but is not postulated again once they land
    and actually examine the circles.  Also, it says that they don't understand why the
    winds haven't reseeded these spots, when in fact they remark in the story that it has been
    reseeded and succession is progressing. | 
  
    | 6 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | Hartley: The mud flats mentioned
    are actually in the delta of the central river of the Northern Continent. | 
  
    | 7 | col 1; 1st full
    para |  | I don't recall any potential
    landing sites being indicated in the north, and Dragonsdawn only mentions the three
    in the south.  But I could be wrong on this one. | 
  
    | 7 | col 2: sidebar |  | Ezra Keroon was Captain of the
    Bahrain, and James Tillek Captain of the Buenos Aires (which is weird, since the dolphins
    are in the Bahrain, but that's the way it was). | 
  
    | 8 | col 1; last para |  | Admiral Benden did not spend the
    entire trip awake, only the first and last five years; he was in cold sleep the other
    five.  This probably applies to the others mentioned as having spent the entire trip
    awake as well--most likely they were only awake for one five-year watch. | 
  
    | 9 | col 1; 1st full
    para |  | It says that landing specialists
    were woken six months before landing.  This is not directly indicated in the book,
    and sounds a bit too early to me. | 
  
    | 9 | map |  | Hartley: "Nonsense!  
    Stationary geosynchonous orbit must be directly above the equator" and would take
    "lots of orbits to get down from"  instead of that short path from ~Fort to
    Landing. | 
  
    | 11 | col 2; end 1st
    para |  | It says that the EEC survey team
    arrived 20 years after the last pass, but I think it was only a few years, because there's
    nearly 200 years between their survey and the colony's Landing. | 
  
    | 17 | col 2; 1st para |  | Cows are said to have served as
    carriers for newly bred horses and other animals, but I think Dragonsdawn described
    horses bearing horses, which had been in cold sleep on the ships. | 
  
    | 21 | col 1; 2nd para |  | It says the nomads were
    "assigned lands."  This is imprecise--in the initial landing settlement,
    space at the edge was set aside for them, but they mostly all melted away into the
    countryside.  Also, they did not start using caves for shelter until Threadfall,
    which is why a high percentage was killed. | 
  
    | 24 | col 1; end 1st
    full para |  | Threadfall is said to have
    "doubled back" from Macedonia to strike Bordeaux.  All I have to say is
    huh? | 
  
    | 25 | col 1; 3rd full
    para |  | Thread is said to elongate into
    a filament as it passes through the atmosphere.  In Dragonsdawn, it says that
    the outer most shell layer burns off in the atmosphere, leaving an inner capsule intact;
    15,000 feet above the surface, the inner capsule opens into ribbons. | 
  
    | 27 | col 2; 1st para |  | "carbon" should
    probably be "calcium."  Fire-lizards are carbon-based as we are, but the
    have boron instead of calcium in their bones; a lighter element which assists flight. | 
  
    | 31 | col 1; last para |  | Kitti Ping is
    legendary throughout the FSP; she's the only human to have been trained directly by the
    Eridani | 
  
    | 31 | col 2; picture |  | Kitti Ping's name is misspelled,
    and her Asian ethnicity is not well-depicted. | 
  
    | 33 | col 2; 1st para |  | The results of the first three
    different groups of bioengineered eggs is not stated in Dragonsdawn, but the
    complete tally of golds, bronzes, and browns adds up correctly. | 
  
    | 33 | col 2; 1st para |  | The group engineered by Wind
    Blossom after Kitti's death only hatched 6 dragons, not 9, and only 3 were golds, the rest
    unspecified (but most likely bronze or brown). | 
  
    | 38 | upper graph |  | The fill patterns for
    "memory" and "empathy" are reversed. | 
  
    | 39 | col 2; 1st para |  | "Fort Hold" should be
    "Fort Weyr" | 
  
    | 39 | col 2; 1st para |  | It did not take the whole pass
    for Fort Weyr to reach full strength--they weyrs were overfull 20 years into the Pass when
    Sean decided to split to form three new Weyrs.  Sean could fly 20 wings, 33 dragons
    each, at any Fall, plus golds and injured dragons equals nearly 700 dragons.  Later,
    DLG says full fighting strength is considered to be 10 wings. | 
  
    | 40 | col 1; end 3rd
    para |  | Ramoth was not the only queen
    dragon when Lessa jumped between for the Oldtimers--Prideth had been hatched and
    was breeding more dragons in the Southern Continent experiment.  Lessa's not that
    stupid! | 
  
    | 43 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | In Dragonsdawn it says
    that whers are not Impressible, while the DLG says they are.  As we know, both are
    imprecise; whers don't Impress to one life-long mate the way dragons and fire-lizards do,
    but they do become attuned to & protective of one or more people (akin to dogs, in my
    view). | 
  
    | 43 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | "can see in total
    darkness"--yeah, sure!  An  oxymoron often used by fantasy writers (lots of
    dwarves can do this, too). | 
  
    | 58 | diagram |  | Altitude labels would make this
    picture more meaningful! | 
  
    | 65 | diagram |  | One of these knots should be for
    the Weyrleader and Weyrwoman; probably the upper left one which is designated as
    Wingleader, since the center one is also for Wingleaders. | 
  
    | 66 | col 1 |  | I question a lot of the
    description of Threadfalls.   In Dragonflight, Fall is clearly straight
    east to west, and this also seems to be the case in Dragonsdawn as well.  As
    the pass continued, the location of Threadfalls did shift.  In Dragonsdawn
    Falls shift 5° northwards. Hartley says the map is correct and related to axial tilt (which I do believe--same should
    happen in the north, only tilted the opposite way, I think.  Hard to wrap my head
    around the rotation involved...)
 | 
  
    | 66 | col 1; 2nd para |  | In describing F'lar's
    construction of Fall Charts from records, it makes it sound like the Oldtimers had charts
    which were lost.  This isn't true--we're told in Dragonflight that the
    Oldtimers had no charts, they "just knew" when Thread was due. | 
  
    | 67 | col 2; last para |  | Imprecise--we know now that the
    Long Intervals were not caused by natural eccentricities in the Red Star's orbit. | 
  
    | 68 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | Neither Hartley or I believe
    that the fire-lizards that Ruth talked to actually witnessed Mt. Garben erupt over 2500
    turns ago, and this was never thought of by Jaxom & pals in the books.  
    Fire-lizards maybe long-lived, but 2500 turns--sheesh! | 
  
    | 72 | col 1; 3rd para |  | It says that most people
    remained south until the 1st Pass ended, but all besides the Ierne Islanders had come
    north by 20 years into the pass, at which time they came, too (info from "Second
    Weyr"). | 
  
    | 72 | col 1; 3rd para |  | It says that the dragonriders
    started out in Fort Hold after moving north, but in Dragonsdawn it implies a direct
    move into Fort Weyr. | 
  
    | 72 | col 1; 4th para |  | We now know from Chronicles of
    Pern that Ruatha was not the first major Hold after Fort to be founded; South Boll
    preceded it. | 
  
    | 73 | col 1; 1st full
    para |  | It says it's a day's fast ride
    from Fort Hold to Fort Weyr, but in Masterharper it takes only a few hours. | 
  
    | 73 | col 1; end 3rd
    full para |  | Milk products were rare, and
    usually reserved for children. | 
  
    | 73 | col 2; 1st para |  | Klah is brewed from ground bark,
    not "infused" like tea. | 
  
    | 76 | col 1; 1st full
    para |  | Now it says everyone but Ierne
    Islanders was north  by year 40; again, they moved north in the 28th colony year. | 
  
    | 76 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | On page 3 a Pernese year is said
    to last 362 days, not 366 (366 earth days is an equivalent amount of time to a Pernese
    year, as the Pernese day is slightly longer). | 
  
    | 76 | col 2; 4th para |  | Benden is considered the
    pre-eminent winecrafthall, though it may not have authority over others.  There may
    not be one dominant art crafthall, and certainly different types of artists may be
    accommodated by other crafts, but there are dedicated art crafthalls, such as Hall Domaize
    in Dragonseye/Red Star Rising where Iantine learns to paint. | 
  
    | 78 | col 2; 2nd full
    para |  | Says that the Harpering is the
    only craft to have only one hall.  However, I don't remember reading about any other
    Healer Halls, either, and I think that if the Healers were de-centralized that even more
    knowledge would be lost to them (there aren't enough experts to form splinter halls). | 
  
    | 82 | col 2; start 1st
    full para |  | "Will be sought until he
    dies" should now be made past tense. | 
  
    | 82 | col 2; 2nd full
    para |  | We now know that Robinton did
    marry once. | 
  
    | 85 | col 2; 2nd full
    para |  | Imprecise--Healercraft is the
    oldest Craft on Pern, not just one of the oldest. | 
  
    | 87 | col 1; end 2nd
    full para |  | Although technically correct,
    the term "surgeon" implies more than it should.   The
    "surgeons" of modern Pern perform mostly field-surgery; i.e. they stitch up
    wounds.  Other types of surgery besides appendectomies, tonsillectomies, and Cesarean
    Sections are not performed until after Aivas is re-discovered. | 
  
    | 88 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | I think stating that half of the
    population was killed by the plague in the 6th Pass is an overstatement. | 
  
    | 89 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | It says there is no social
    stigma attached to suicide.  This may be true in terms of euthanasia, but holders
    have been shocked by the notion that a dragonrider might suicide if his/her dragon is
    killed. | 
  
    | 89 | col 1-2 |  | It says there is still plenty of
    land to hold in the 9th Pass; this is only true of the Southern Continent--the north is
    full to bursting, which is why Holders have been discreetly sending younger sons south to
    Toric. | 
  
    | 90 | col 1-2 |  | Again, I was pretty sure that
    the dragonriders started out in Fort Weyr after the 2nd Crossing, not Fort Hold. | 
  
    | 91 | col 1; middle 1st
    full para |  | It says that the original
    dragons were much smaller than the original Fort weyrs could accommodate--so why was
    weyrling Alaranth of Torene incredibly cramped in her quarters? (Okay, so the Weyr had 100
    more dragons than weyrs so she was stuffed where space was available...) | 
  
    | 91 | col 1; end 1st
    full para |  | It says that dragons grew larger
    until the 2nd Pass, and then remained the same size until the 8th Interval.  This
    seems an unlikely and unnatural evolution of draconic sizes.  A slow, steady increase
    until the 9th Pass would be more likely. | 
  
    | 91 | col 1; 3rd full
    para |  | It says the ratio of support
    staff to dragonriders is nearly 3:1.  This seems awfully high to me, even including
    children and extended family members, and the diagrams of the lower caverns don't show
    enough room to accommodate this many people. | 
  
    | 91-92 |  |  | These characters do not appear
    in any books (and the same is true of other characters mentioned in DLG).  I find the
    idea of a non-Oldtimer Headwoman and head Cook in Fort Weyr improbable at the beginning of
    the pass.  Also, the name of the new headwoman, Margetta, is awfully close to
    Margatta, a Fort queenrider, which makes me doubt that Anne would ever use this character. | 
  
    | 94 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | It says that Weyrs train their
    own healers; this is imprecise and implies that the Healer Hall doesn't send them healers.
      As said earlier in DLG, the Healer Hall does send them healers, trained to tend to
    humans.  It is dragon care that is taught within the Weyr. | 
  
    | 95 | col 1; 1st para |  | We now know from The Second Weyr
    that this account of the founding of Benden Weyr is incorrect in many ways.  Mihall
    and Torene were not yet mated when Benden was founded, Mihall was only 18, and he was not
    designated as the new Weyrleader in advance--that would have been nepotism which was
    assiduously avoided by most folk.  He became the Weyrleader when his Brianth flew
    Alaranth in her first mating flight.  (She was not designated as Weyrwoman in advance
    either; her dragon happened to be the first of the new Benden queens to rise to mate). | 
  
    | 95 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | Benden Weyr was not named over
    the objections of Admiral Benden, he was dead already.  And the Weyr was established
    in the 28th colony year, not the 18th Also note that the DLG contradicts itself over the timing of the founding
      of Benden Weyr - in the first paragraph of this section, it said that the
      Weyr was founded in the First Interval.
 | 
  
    | 95 | col 2; 2nd full
    para |  | It says that Mihall was fostered
    because Sorka's time was filled by care for Faranth; I'd say her time was filled because
    she was Weyrwoman, not just a queenrider.  Even so, Brekke took on fosterlings, and
    she effectively did all the Weyrwoman's duties in Southern Weyr; time can be
      found!  (Though as a site vistor has pointed out, Sorka was doing
      essentially the jobs of both Weyrwoman and Headwoman at that time, while
      Brekke was not acting as a Headwoman too.) | 
  
    | 95 | col 2; last full
    para |  | The stories never explicitly say
    anything about the clutch that Mihall's Brianth came from, but it is possible that he came
    from Faranth's fourth.  (I will post my calculations  of how often queens mated
    elsewhere, given the population growth from year 10 to 28; my conclusion is that they
    mated every 3 years or so, not 2-3 times a year as the stories say they can). | 
  
    | 95-96 |  |  | The Second Weyr never indicates
    that Torene was brought up in Ruatha; her parents live in Telgar Hold and she has a close
    relationship, so it is most likely that she grew up there.  It is possible that she
    was fostered for a few years in Ruatha | 
  
    | 97 | col 2; end last
    para |  | The sites for the other four
    Weyrs were chosen at the time Benden was formed, not during the First Interval. | 
  
    | 99 | col 1; 1st para |  | Major differences between the
    Star Stones at each Weyr is unlikely, as they were all constructed at the same time during
    the 2nd Pass. | 
  
    | 102 | col 2; last full
    para |  | "Scurvy" should be
    "rickets."  Scurvy is caused by a vitamin C deficiency and has nothing to
    do with bones; rickets is caused by a calcium (or vitamin D) deficiency and affects the
    bones. | 
  
    | 103 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | Hartley found the use of
    longbows surprising, since crossbows are available and much easier to use. | 
  
    | 103 | col 2; last para |  | C'gan is said to have
    inadvertently Impressed Tagath; this is not the impression I got from Masterharper of
    Pern, but my memory isn't crystal to this point.  The main reason I question this
    is that C'gan does not seem to have formal training as a Harper, or at least not complete
    training.  I think it more likely that he was Searched as an apprentice from the
    Harper Hall. | 
  
    | 105 | col 1; 3rd para |  | I am confused as to the shape of
    a dragon's tail--I don't see how it can be both forked and spade-shaped.  The
    description from Anne is always forked, but artists always draw it spade-shaped. | 
  
    | 105 | col 1; end 5th
    para |  | "Weyrwomen's" should
    not be capitalized.  (This is an exceedingly common error, I think even by
    Anne.  While the dictionary in the back of the books indicates that junior weyrwomen
    should not be capitalized, it seems that they are when the junior is dropped; maybe this
    is to distinguish them from non-riding women in the weyrs, who could also be referred to
    as weyrwomen?) | 
  
    | 105 | col 1; end 5th
    para |  | Given the map of Benden Weyr
    (which I think is upheld by descriptions in the books), Lessa's weyr should not have a
    service shaft as it is on the opposite side of the bowl from the lower caverns.  
    Besides the junior weyrwomen's quarters, a few other weyrs on that side of the bowl have
    service shafts, e.g. F'lar's. | 
  
    | 107 | col 1; last para |  | Why would the Harper Hall be the
    place where jugglers are trained?  This is news to me! | 
  
    | 107 | col 2; 1st para |  | Benden Hold was founded at the
    same time as Benden Weyr in colony year 28.  Benden Hold was founded by colonists
    from the Longwood and Orkney Stakeholds on Ierne Island. | 
  
    | 111 | col 2; last para |  | As Gorton never appears in any
    of the stories, I dispute that he is an old friend of Robinton's; however, one would
    expect that they have met since Robinton became Masterharper and his reputation for
    familiarity with Benden wines became known. | 
  
    | 113 | col 1; 1st para |  | I find the claimed Pernese
    population of four to five million a bit high, as the major Holds only have around 10,000
    people in rural areas that look directly to them.  (I also find the number 10,000
    high, but it is stated in Nerilka's Story.) | 
  
    | 113 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | Hartley wants to know why mass
    starvation isn't caused by farming less land in Passes than Intervals.  I question
    this too, though can accept the explanation that some of the extra food produced in
    Intervals may be stored up for Passes. | 
  
    | 115 | col 2; 2nd para |  | I've never heard of imprisonment
    used as a punishment, and it seems that the holders shy away from a death penalty as well.
      Instead, more common punishments are rendering offenders holdless, and isolating
    them somewhere, such as on an island. | 
  
    | 115 | col 2; last para |  | I dispute that maladjusted
    individuals received psychiatric care, unless they requested it; Ted Tubberman was
    definitely maladjusted after the first Fall killed his daughter, and everyone knew it, but
    no one forced psychiatric care on him. | 
  
    | 116 | col 1; 1st full
    para |  | The apprentice system was based
    upon that used in times long past on Earth.  DLG implies that it was used in modern
    times on Earth and First Centauri, and this is not indicated in the books. | 
  
    | 117 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | I dispute that Menolly fosters
    her children with Silvina, and that her inclination is not towards child rearing.  In
    Dolphins of Pern she takes Robse with her to Paradise River Hold, and actively takes care
    of him.  Possibly when her children grow older she will find it expedient to leave
    them with Silvina more often. | 
  
    | 118 | col 2; 1st para |  | I've never heard mention of a
    Harper Hall in Ista, and earlier the DLG said that Harpering is one of the only crafts to
    have only a central Hall. | 
  
    | 118 | col 2; 3rd full
    para |  | The description of the value of
    a mark versus changes in supply, are backwards to my intuition and the economic theory of
    supply and demand. | 
  
    | 119 | col 1; last para |  | Nine marks for a runnerbeast
    sounds steep; I thought Sebell sold some for only a few marks at the Nabol Gather. | 
  
    | 119 | col 2; 1st para |  | Info about the ocean currents
    & gulf stream is contradicted by the map in Dolphins of Pern, and by common
    sense. | 
  
    | 120 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | Dragonflight and Masterharper
    of Pern disagree over how Crom was "acquired" by Fax.  In MoP he
    marries Gemma before actively conquering Crom, rather than passively assuming Crom because
    he married her. | 
  
    | 120 | col 1; end 2nd
    full para |  | The Lord Holder of Ruatha and
    father of Lessa is Kale, not "Micawl." | 
  
    | 120 | col 2; 1st full
    para |  | Missing information: Lord Bargen
    of High Reaches Hold is a son of the Lord Holder killed by Fax. | 
  
    | 121 | col 2; 1st para |  | High Reaches was not the third
    Weyr; it was fifth or sixth. | 
  
    | 122 | col 1; 1st para |  | F'lar killed T'kul in a duel
    years after the Oldtimers were sent to Southern Weyr; no other Olditimers moved south at
    this time, save D'ram who went to revitalize them.  I believe Kylara was already dead
    at this time. | 
  
    | 122 | col 2; 1st para |  | Zi Ongola was the founder of
    Tillek Hold, which wasn't named for several years, and was named after Jim Tillek's death.
      It is possible that Jim did help found the Hold. | 
  
    | 126 | col 2; 2nd full
    para |  | Coastal charts made by the
    Ancients should be dreadfully inaccurate by the 9th Pass;  it is known within the
    books that the coastline has changed significantly over the years. | 
  
    | 130 | col 1; 1st para |  | Ruatha is not the 2nd Hold,
    South Boll is. | 
  
    | 130 | col 1; end 2nd
    para |  | Ruatha was never called
    "Red's Ford;" Red Hanrahan named it "Rua Atha" or Ruatha from the
    start. | 
  
    | 130- 131
 |  |  | Alessan also bred the beasts
    that his father wanted; the sprinters were a side benefit. | 
  
    | 131 | col 1; 2nd full
    para |  | I thought the construction was
    begun by Lord Leef, not Alessan. | 
  
    | 131 | col 2; 1st para |  | Lessa's 2nd jump between
    times did not confirm the phenomena--she was still completely confused; F'lar's purposeful
    jump between times confirmed it. | 
  
    | 132 | col 2; 1st para |  | Emily Boll dies in colony year
    16, not 33. | 
  
    | 135 | col 1; last para |  | Earlier (page 75), the DLG
    implied that only Fort Hold makes slubbed fabrics; Masterweavers making them in the Hall
    in South Boll contradicts this. | 
  
    | 140 | col 1; last para |  | While traders may have regular
    routes, it would not make sense for them to all follow the same route!  In Renegades
    of Pern, the Lilcamp train does winter near Telgar, but sets off in a different
    direction than what the DLG describes; and they don't see to have a regular route. | 
  
    | 143 | col 2; 1st para |  | Telgar was the third or fourth
    Weyr to be occupied, not the final northern one. | 
  
    | 144 | col 2; last para |  | The books never mention a Healer
    Hall in South Telgar Hold. (And as I mentioned earlier, I don't think Pern has enough
    qualified Master Healers to be able to split into two teaching Halls.) | 
  
    | 146 | diagram |  | Clarification: this is the Fort
    Harper Hall, and not the one mentioned in Ista. | 
  
    | 147 | col 2; 1st para |  | Ista hatching grounds were used
    even before Benden Weyr was built, and Ista became the third or fourth Weyr, not the
    fifth. | 
  
    | 147 | col 2; last para |  | Ista should have reached full
    size before year 258. | 
  
    | 153 | col 2; last para |  | Ezra Keroon was Captain of the
    Bahrain, not the Buenos Aires. | 
  
    | 153 | col 2; last para |  | Calling Keroon Hold the home
    hold of Moreta is imprecise; her family had a small hold within the Keroon region--they
    were not part of Keroon Hold proper.  Moreta's home hold is described correctly three
    paragraphs later. | 
  
    | 154 | col 1; 4th full
    para |  | This is overly picky, but the
    meeting at the Red Butte in Moreta's time was between five Weyrleaders and one Wingleader,
    as the sixth Weyrleader, Sh'gall, was ill. | 
  
    | 156 | col 2; 1st para |  | The first two sentences imply
    that Benden was the second Hold in the north, but we know that at least four other major
    Holds preceded it.  This whole paragraph could be Anne's original plan for the
    migration, before actually writing about it. | 
  
    | 158 | col 1; 2nd para |  | I find it unlikely that forests
    were not started until Lord Asgenar's father propagated them late in the 8th Interval;
    more likely they began much earlier in the long interval. | 
  
    | 160 | col 2; 1st para |  | The idea of granite being
    shipped all over from Greystones strikes me as unlikely and unnecessary--granite should be
    found in large quantities all over the northern continent.  Even on Earth, granite
    rarely used far from its source, due to the cost of shipping.  On the other hand, the
    Pernese do use much more stone for building than we do, and the Greystones Granite may be
    a particularly beautiful variety which is in demand for its decorative value. | 
  
    | 160 | col 2; last
    sentence |  | Typographical
    error--"beastfold" should be "beasthold" | 
  
    | 164 | col 1; last para |  | There are fosterlings sent to
    and from Half-Circle Sea Hold before Harper Elgion arrived. | 
  
    | 166 | col 2; last para |  | People had gone back to the
    South before Lessa and F'nor went in the 8th Interval:  Landing was checked up on in
    the 2nd Pass, sailors visited it in the 6th Pass and brought back the plague, and other
    sailors were likely blown off course to the south at other times. | 
  
    | 168 | col 1; 1st full
    para |  | D'ram did not wait for most of
    the Oldtimers in Southern Weyr to die before requesting a new queen; he requested
    additional riders and a queen when he decided to take over. | 
  
    | 169 | picture |  | The label is wrong; this harp
    appears to be the one described as a present to Robinton and kept now in Cove Hold on
    pages 170-171. | 
  
    | 170 | col 2; last para |  | The Harpers mentioned in this
    paragraph never appear in any of the books, nor does the harp they made for Robinton.
      They do however, feature in Nye's "Dragonharper" book. | 
  
    | 173 | col 2; 1st para |  | Mount Garben did not show signs
    of eruption, Mount Picchu did, even though Garben is the one that erupted. | 
  
    | 173 | picture |  | In Dragonsdawn, the
    colony flag is not described as having a map of Pern on it, only that it has the plow and
    sickle in the upper left corner, and that it is blue, white, and yellow. |